Difference between revisions of "Introducing Hilarity"
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Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time. | Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time. | ||
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| + | 1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised. | ||
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| + | 2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects. | ||
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| + | 3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious. | ||
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| + | 4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish. | ||
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| + | 5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay! | ||
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| + | 6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar. | ||
Revision as of 13:05, 24 February 2006
Chadius: We should probably introduce Hilarity. Bish is coming back from the supermarket and she blew up something...or something like that.
Aurora: Like, smoke coming from the basement, Bish panicking and dragging her out, then her going "ooo, candy!" and completely oblivious to the damage to his house?
Chadius: Yeah, that's pretty kewl. Lemme dump this into a wiki.
Aurora: needs more expansion. perhaps some eyerolling from bish and getting a fire extinguisher, showing that this happens all the time.
Panels & Stuff:
1 - Bish's kitchen. Bish is in background, coming in from garage with groceries in bag. Smoke is seeping out from under a closed door on the side. Bish looks surprised.
2 - No people in scene. Door is now open, smoke is pouring out. Sound effects.
3 - Bish appears with Hilarity in arms. His hair is mussed. They're both smudged with dirt. She looks unconscious.
4 - Hilarity looks all starry eyed up at Bish.
5 - Hilarity has candy. Yay!
6 - Bish eyerolls, fire extinguisher in hand, smoke still pouring out from the basement. Hilarity is munching on a wrapped candy bar.
