Difference between revisions of "Talk:My Fearsome Craps"
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Steak Fart entry: 8.0 for style, 7.5 for background and content --[[User:Ratri|Ratri]] 10:54, 31 May 2006 (EST) | Steak Fart entry: 8.0 for style, 7.5 for background and content --[[User:Ratri|Ratri]] 10:54, 31 May 2006 (EST) | ||
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| + | June 6 Coffeemaker entry: Slow start. "Splattering shrapnel-shits" has an interesting alliteration to it. Overuse of the verb "pinch" can detract at times. Closing imagery is powerful and compelling. 8.3 for style, 7.8 for background and content. --[[User:Ratri|Ratri]] 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST) | ||
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| + | June 7 Stress entry: Cannon metaphor reminiscent of previous entry's artillery imagery. Background is brief but comprehensive; not enough content details. 7.0 for style, 6.0 for background and content. --[[User:Ratri|Ratri]] 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST) | ||
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I endorse this page! -Zahnnie 16:30, 24 May 2006 (EST)
Steak Fart entry: 8.0 for style, 7.5 for background and content --Ratri 10:54, 31 May 2006 (EST)
June 6 Coffeemaker entry: Slow start. "Splattering shrapnel-shits" has an interesting alliteration to it. Overuse of the verb "pinch" can detract at times. Closing imagery is powerful and compelling. 8.3 for style, 7.8 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)
June 7 Stress entry: Cannon metaphor reminiscent of previous entry's artillery imagery. Background is brief but comprehensive; not enough content details. 7.0 for style, 6.0 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)
