Talk:My Fearsome Craps

I endorse this page! -Zahnnie 16:30, 24 May 2006 (EST)

Steak Fart entry: 8.0 for style, 7.5 for background and content --Ratri 10:54, 31 May 2006 (EST)

June 6 Coffeemaker entry: Slow start. "Splattering shrapnel-shits" has an interesting alliteration to it. Overuse of the verb "pinch" can detract at times. Closing imagery is powerful and compelling. 8.3 for style, 7.8 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)

June 7 Stress entry: Cannon metaphor reminiscent of previous entry's artillery imagery. Background is brief but comprehensive; not enough content details. 7.0 for style, 6.0 for background and content. --Ratri 21:00, 7 Jun 2006 (EST)